Thursday, December 3, 2015


Differences between Essay #2 and Essay #3

 

Paper #2 was dealing with advertisements and what they mean. The 3rd paper was an argument about a certain topic you feel strongly about. An argument paper is a question that makes you take a closer look, while the analysis paper was just going in depth with what you see. Paper three didn’t require pictures to be included in the essay, in the second paper it was necessary to show visuals so then people will understand what you are analyzing. In paper two you were describing something to the audience, in paper three you were informing. There is the difference on how in the third paper people had to do research on their topic. Also, in the second paper you didn’t have to get so in depth in why the topic matters to you.

      

Final Essay #3

Amy Plastow

English 101

Professor Begert

20 November 2015


            Do you think that you can make an outstanding impact on what happens in the future? Most people would say no to that question because it seems that only well-known people like Bill Gates or Steve Jobs could do something that big that has an impact on the future. But that isn’t always the way things have to be. One example is how you can change the atmosphere, one step at a time, therefore you can change the future, starting right now! If you weren’t so immediate to answer that first question then I’ll ask you this, do you want to change the world? Almost everyone would answer that question with a big YES! Everyone wants to change the Earth in some way, the specific way to change the world that I am talking about is by recycling.

            Everyone on this planet wants to be here as long as they feel they should, and everyone including you probably want their grandchildren and great grandchildren to have that same experience. So in order to ensure that everyone will have the life they should live, people have to make some changes to their lifestyles. That can start with recycling, you can will reduce the effects that cause global warming significantly. If global warming gets stopped, even if it’s temporary by a few thousand years, you are still extending the globe’s lifespan and it thanks you for that.

            I myself have been recycling for as long as I can remember. Before I was born it wasn’t as popular, but my parents made sure to reuse anything that they could and to be cautious where they dispose their items. When my sister and I got to the age where we started realizing what am impact recycling has, we started doing it almost immediately. Now we recycle paper, cardboard, plastic, aluminum, glass and more. Anything that can basically be recycled, we do it all.

We want planet Earth to stay here as long as possible, life is precious and it shouldn’t end from greenhouse gasses that partially could have been reduced from recycling. There are several good things that come out of recycling. But, there are some downsides to it as well.

            Recycling can protect the environment, for example, when we recycle paper, less trees are getting cut down because the demand for paper is getting lessened, so they have to shorten the supply. When less trees are getting cut down we are saving all of the species that depend on the forest for protection, shelter, and a home.

            According to Conserve Energy Future, when you recycle there is less pollution getting sent out into the atmosphere Jason Brennon who works for Affluent Magazine says that recycling just half of your yearly recyclable household waste saves 2,400 pounds of CO2 being released into the atmosphere? So if everyone globally starts recycling their recyclables year round then we could slow down global warming. Additionally, when massive waste is burned it produces a tremendous amount of greenhouse gas emissions, like CO2 and CFC’s (Chlorofluorocarbons) (CEF). Recycling centers make sure that their burning process has the least amount of wasted gases. They take whatever gas’s that are given off in the burning process and contain them, then they make sure those gasses are used for something they are needed for.

            Recycling will allow you to conserve natural resources. When a new product is made, fresh raw materials from beneath Earth’s surface will have to be mined and extracted, which is a lot of unnecessary work to do.  It makes a lot more sense to use what we already have on the surface and just reuse it. We can change its form, density, all sorts of things, so why do people have the need to continuously bringing new materials up from below? By recycling we can save the Earth’s materials and get what we want at the same time! It’s a win-win situation. (CEF).

            Plastic is a non-biodegradable item, which means that it will never break down and compost. Unlike a banana peel that will dissolve into the soil. So if you ever see a plastic bag on the side of the road while on a walk you should pick it up and recycle it, because it will still be there 2000 years later, potentially harming the soil and stopping plants from growing.

            Fossil fuels takes millions of years to form, so we have to reduce the usage of them if we want to have some for the future generations. We have to use these fossil fuels wisely and carefully. Recycling doesn’t use any fossil fuels, so that is one way that you can stop using the fossil fuels.

            In some states of the USA you get money back for recycling, which is a good motive if you are going to start recycling. The states that pay you to recycle are California, Connecticut, Hawaii, Iowa, Massachusetts, Maine, Michigan, New York, Oregon, and Vermont. My friend Jacob has a family member who lives in Connecticut, he says, “There is a machine that you can put your aluminum cans in one by one and you get a receipt for it with money”.

One of the downsides to recycling is that Methane gas is produced during the process of burning/melting down recyclables. If that gas gets leaked out, then it is hazardous to global warming and also to ozone depletion. Like I mentioned before, it does happen, which is why the recycling centers try their hardest to not let the gasses leak out. If it does happen it wouldn’t be as much methane being put out into the ozone layer than if you didn’t recycle at all. If people have any concerns with the jobs of people when sorting through wastes and coming across toxins they should know that the employers are safe when they are at work. The average recycle plant worker goes to work wearing a hard hat, goggles, two layers of gloves and high top, steel-toed boots. Also, if any chemical does come in contact with them they take care of it as soon as possible if not immediately (HerladNet).

Some people might say that Global Warming is a myth, that it isn’t real. Actually, thanks to science we know that for 650,000 years the carbon dioxide (parts per million) level has not been above 300 (PPM), right now it is at 400(PPM). That is a huge increase for the atmosphere. The warming trend right now is most likely human-induced. (NASA)

As you can see by now, recycling is important to me, and it should be important to you as well.  If you aren’t sure on how you can start recycling it is not hard at all. You just have to get a bin(s) that you can put all your recyclables in, separating them of course by material. Make sure to do your research on where the closest recycle bins are, either you can bring them there and dump them out yourself or you can pay to have the county come out and get them.

                 Recycling is really a magnificent thing to do, who ever thought of it is a genius! Buying recycled items like carpet, purses, and shoes are getting more and more popular every day. Just think twice before you throw your soda can into the garbage, it could be going somewhere else, where the materials would be getting reused instead of buried in stinky garbage. I recycle, my family recycles, and you should too. Start recycling today and save planet Earth.















Work Cited

"Advantages and Disadvantages of Recycling".Conserve Energy Future. 
            Conserve Energy Future. Web.19 Nov. 2015.

Brennan, Jason."Reasons Why You Should Recycle".Affluent Magazine.
               Polo Media Group Inc..Web. 19 Nov. 2015.

"Recycling- Some Benefits and Some Drawbacks" Northern California Compactors Inc. 
             Northern California Compactors Inc.Web.20 Nov. 2015.

"At recycling center, workers sort 550 tons of trash a day".HeraldNet.
             The Daily Harold Co.Web. 20 Nov. 2015.

"Climate change: How do we know?".NASA. 
            NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory.Web.20 Nov. 2015.

Kirsch, Jacob. Personal Interview. 24 Nov. 2015

“legislation/usa/allstatestable”.Bottle Bill Resource Guide.
           Container Recycling Institute, 2016. Web. 29 Nov. 2015.





Tuesday, December 1, 2015

work cited for essay #3


Work Cited

"Advantages and Disadvantages of Recycling".Conserve Energy Future. 
            Conserve Energy Future. Web.19 Nov. 2015.
 
Brennan, Jason."Reasons Why You Should Recycle".Affluent Magazine.
               Polo Media Group Inc..Web. 19 Nov. 2015.
 
"Recycling- Some Benefits and Some Drawbacks" Northern California Compactors Inc. 

             Northern California Compactors Inc.Web.20 Nov. 2015.

"At recycling center, workers sort 550 tons of trash a day".HeraldNet.

             The Daily Harold Co.Web. 20 Nov. 2015.
 
"Climate change: How do we know?".NASA. 
            NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory.Web.20 Nov. 2015.

Kirsch, Jacob. Personal Interview. 24 Nov. 2015
 
“legislation/usa/allstatestable”.Bottle Bill Resource Guide.
           Container Recycling Institute, 2016. Web. 29 Nov. 2015.


http://climate.nasa.gov/evidence/
http://www.bottlebill.org/legislation/usa/allstatestable.htm

In-Class Lab: Analyzing an Argument

Ælfs Paper
1. a) The main point is to prove that the Anthropogenic Climate Disorder is real and it is serious.
    b) The thesis statement is clearly stated through out the first paragraph.
2. a) The artic ice extent change, how it is warmer in winter, global warming, the troposphere and stratosphere changing temperatures, CO2 levels and the oceans warming, if everyone can change their routines then we might be able to pause global warming for a bit, even though we can't stop it.
    b) There are graphs, a speech made by a Professor.
    c) All of the reasons are very sufficient and plausible, they fit in perfectly.
3. a) There are a few counterarguments brought up about how it is too late to stop Global Warming, and how one human being wont make a big difference.
    b) She refutes the first argument by saying that although we can't stop global warming we can either make it worse or reduce the amount of CO2 we are putting into the atmosphere. For the second argument she says that if you start being more aware of what you are doing it might cause more and more people to do it. It will turn into the ripple effect that will benefit the world.
    c) The writer does take into consideration with the opposing statements because one of them is true but she mentions how you can maintain the greenhouse gasses and still save the earth.
    d) Her arguments are appropriate for the circumstances.
4. a) Each source is incorporated into her writing fluently, they aren't put at the end of sentences to show where she got it from. She put them into her writing to make them seem more credible.
    b) All of her sources seem credible, except that she used Wikipedia, which is not always reliable but since she knows what she is talking about it works, she would be able to tell right from wrong.
    c) They all seem current, which for this topic if it has information from ten years ago from global climate change then it is still going on today, so it really doesn't matter as much.
5.  a) The writer makes sure that the reader will understand what she is talking about, there is background information and I also assume that the majority of people living have a small idea about global warming, whether it is good or bad.
     b) The language does include the reader, because it does apply to the world today and how WE can change it by doing certain things. So yes I felt really included in this paper.
     c) Yes the author and I share many beliefs, in fact, I did my argument paper on recycling and how we can help the world in the future.
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Matt's Paper
1. a) The main point is that there should be more gun control.
    b) There is a clearly stated thesis in the first paragraph.
2. a) It is easy to buy a gun in WA state, children have shot themselves before, how to store them safely.
    b) There are government officials cited throughout the paper.
    c) The reasons are plausible and sufficient.
3. a) There are mentions on how guns kill people.
    b) He acknowledges them by saying that if guns are banned then people are more vulnerable.
    c) The writer treats the other arguments appropriately.
    d) His arguments are appropriate.
4. a) There are quotes incorporated into his essay. There is also several sources listed after a fact.
    b) They are all very credible, not biased whatsoever.
    c) They are current, which is good because this is a new uproar of protesting.
5. a) Right off the bat in the first paragraph he quotes what the 2nd amendment says in the constitution, so that helps the reader understand that he will be talking about the debate with firearms.
    b) The reader isn't really included but you still get into the debate and understand what the point he is trying to make is saying.
    c) Yes, I believe that there should be safety courses for anyone who wants to purchase a firearm and so they can use it properly.